Georgia's sunflower and green vase.

So beautifully done Georgia. Any comments I might have are kind of nitpicking. Georgia has taken the suggested feedback and created a piece that has so much more life than her photo. The integrity of the shapes of each petal is very well done without being too tight and integrate really well into the whole flower. There is a fantastic sense of volume in the vase and the grapes without being overly rendered. The lighting is really well done.

 

Here is Georgia's first pass. Well done but not quite the success of the new version.

So here's the nitpicking part.

1. I would suggest that going the last percent by cleaning up just a few edges. Here on the grapes check the roundness of the grapes, the one on the edge feels a bit flat.

2. This edge could be cleaned up. The nature of the object can dictate the edges. In this case, a refined, manufactured object calls for smoother edges than the wild natural flower.

3. A very small point but the darkest part of the shadow would be right under the front part of the vase.

Great job!