I like the additional watering cans in Klee's picture. I think that Heidi made a good decision to take out the drain. I think it has too much importance in the picture as the path leading in from the left is bracketed by the cat on the table and the chair, framing the grated drain. The oddness of the composition, with the half a chair facing away from the scene, makes it intriguing.
I think that Heidi's painting is a successful interpretation of the Klee piece but to my eye, with more pleasing colors.
1. As an alternative, I thought that it might be interesting to turn the chair into the scene. It creates a different feel.
2. Notice the perspective of the legs of the table.
3. As I mentioned, I could see putting another watering can or two back in the scene but maybe staggering them slightly.
4. I might give the edge of the grass a little more rhythm.
Except for the more opaque floor and perhaps making the cat a little bigger, I don't think that Heidi needs to change anything. It's a successful homage.
What an interesting painting. I really like the idea of turning the chair around (I would have never thought of that). I too like the yellow.
ReplyDeleteDitto Lonna. Heidi's painting is very pleasing. Leah
ReplyDeleteI agree.....turning the chair around makes it a different painting entirely.....the original has more tension though, which I rather like. I would have painted more watering cans but that kind of detail is challenging for me. Michael's feedback and the comments very helpful! thank you. Heidi
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