Lonna's white barn

 Here is Lonna's pastel paintingof a white barn. It's inspired by one of Susan's paintings. I think it's very successful. The perspective and solidity of the barn is really good. The color is quite good as well.










I have only a few comments on this piece.  1. I might flatten the ground plane in front of the barn just a little, though the downward curving ground plane works fine. 2. I might consider cutting into the mass of trees to give shape to two separate trees with a differentiation of light and dark between them.  3. I might clean up the shapes of these trees a little. 4. This one as well. 5. Consider darkening the side of the barn as the front of the barn is in the primary light.             Overall a great feel in this painting Lonna.