A really sweet new one from Marilyn. It feels super fresh and feels like one of those rare ones when you just kind of nail it out of the gate. I believe that Marilyn has caught her spring groove.I have only three quick suggestions to consider:
1. As with the last table painting, if the structure under the table is shielded from the light by the table top and therefore in shadow it would generally be darker than the top and the other objects in the light. Also the flower pop more when the main post of the table's value isn't competing with them.
3. The same issue here on the underside of the white bowl though there would be light reflected on it from the table.
2. Marilyn said she knows that the seat of the chair is tilted up and a little long but she's considering leaving it because it's fun. Here I've changed it a bit to split the difference. The thing is, in this painting everything else is pretty regular so the funky angle of the chair jumps out as anomalous more than it would in a painting with lots of tilty stuff.
I think that Marilyn nailed this one and I wouldn't touch the beautiful flowers or the fun table top. Great job.
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